Kia ora Alice, I really enjoyed reading your holiday highlights about your trip to Rainbow's End and the way you used the five senses to make your writing descriptive. Maybe next time you could proofread and check your spelling. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.
Kia ora Alice,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your holiday highlights about your trip to Rainbow's End and the way you used the five senses to make your writing descriptive. Maybe next time you could proofread and check your spelling. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.