Show Don't Tell
The Dragon Forest
Before: We are in the dragon Forest you know. The rumor about the dragon is true, said winter. stop trying to scare me said, Rosie
After: We are here Moaned winter The rumor must be truth you know said, Winter, stop trying to scare me scream Rosie. you go I can stay here said Rosie are you too scared Accused Winter. Let's go get the Berry And make the soup for Mum hopefully it will work on her.
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